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Elliot's Death

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"Humpty Dumpty, I reject you." the husky voice of it's contractor breathed in exhaustion.
His body shook with unbearable misery, bleeding heavily from multiple wounds. The blurry vision came in waves as the weak teen tried to keep his eyes open. Darkness, coming like a evil shadow ready to eat, slowly consumed his inner being. Forcing the death to drain any life from his weeping soul. The blinding pain overwhelmed him, to the point where it was impossible to breath and he just wanted to give up. The ghostly grasp of death was hanging heavily over the him, every valuable second slowly slipping away. He tried to look away from the incoming blackness, desperately searching towards a figure in front of him. Too weak to cry out , he tried to lift his hand and reach to the other. But the heavy burden of death weighed on him and forced him down. The last thing he saw was the petrified look of his servant yelling out to him. But all he could hear was a mumbled blur and with that, his vision finally disappeared into nothing.
The ringing screeches of the ugly creature above him boomed in the atmosphere as it cried in pain. Its blob like form wiggled and squirmed as it slowly died, the room shaking from its loud bellows. The alarming noise that came from it blocked the cries of any other voice. Below the dieing form, the limp body of the once loved friend stayed still. He continued to bleed with no life showing in his pale face. His bloody hand laid lifeless beside his stained sword, almost like a murder scene. Not fare from his body, another male sat stoned. He clumsily moved to his feet and raced the the deceased swordsman. His heart pounded rapidly in his chest, his breath hitched with grief. He screamed out the others name, over and over again. Shaking the body of his lost friend, he desperate wanted him to wake up. But still the noble did not move, his face stuck in a death expression. The servant could not breath, let alone bare the excruciating pain that came from his chest. He cried and cried, gripping the others shirt and burred his face into the bloody cloths. Heavy tears streamed down, stinging his face that cringed with sorrow. Already, he wanted him back, to open those eyes. He begged for him to hug him back and give him warmth. But still the empty body did not move let alone give warmth. Never did the shorter teen feel so alone, so empty. How neglected he felt from just seeing how his partner died, suffering in front of him. The sharp claws of loneliness seemed to rip his heart out at that moment. Filling him with the suffocating smoke of quilt that blinded him with uncertainty. His depressed sobs came deep from his body, hurting him with every gasp. The sadness was so sinister, it seemed the choke him. His body shook from this pain but he continued to cry on his lost friend. The sound of footsteps didn't seem to pass his ears as more people came from his calls. They all stared stunned and unsure what to do as they watched. It only happened for only a few painful minutes and already, they loss a close friend. They all lost Elliot.
Oh I was crying while I was writing this! XD The sadness of such a wonderful character dieing...-_- I hate Jun-sama for doing such a thing, but I love her for making it so tragic. Poor Elliot!! I can't see his die, I just cant. Than why did I write about his death? I have no idea.
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Elliot: Hey! Excuse me, but I'm not dead.
Me: Well for now, not in the manga you're not.
Elliot: Jerk
Me: Well sorry! I don't want you to die either.
Elliot: But you wrote about it!
Me: So! I had to because it was so sad.
Elliot: shut up, you're upsetting Leo!
Leo: ...*sniffle*
Me: It's not my fault he read it*eye roll*
Elliot: Bastard!!
Me; EEKKK!!
***
ANYWAY!! This is actually part of a story I am writing in Fanfiction. You can check it out if you get more interested (plz look at it *-*) I love Elliot and Leo too much to see their hearts break so much, so I'm working on a story about Elliot still alive after everything. Instead of dieing, he went into a coma(don't ask why, Will did something I guess) Now Leo and him have to keep their love for each other a secret until the Nightrays hear about them. (yes, they are alive too...just bare with me please!)
here is the link --->[link]

Thanks for listening to my dumb hopes for people to notice my stories. ^v^ If you have any comment about anything, just let me know.

P.S. SPOILER ALERT!!
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ShirleyWade's avatar
I know that I have already commented in this story...
but... As I read it again, I felt I gotta comment it again, b-because...
YOU JUST DESERVE BE COMMENTED!
And thanks for write it...
It's so well written, but it's so sad...
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